A commenter left a awesome message. Upfront, I was stand-offish. However, when a person IS correct; correction should apply.
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"Railroading"
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Take the free ride...
"Railroading"
Railroading
Reader Comments:“It’s a good story. Your protagonist is LITERALLY railroaded…”. “Clever. High level detail when it comes to railroading culture…”. “A good plot twist. I like the way you tied in all the characters from different aspects...”. “I wouldn’t change the story, theme or plot at...
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